以下是一些考生在雅思寫作中經(jīng)常犯的語法錯誤,希望對大家有所幫助:
一. 不一致(Disagreements)
不一致不僅指主謂不一致,還包括數(shù)的不一致、時態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致等。
例1: When one have money, he can do what he want to.
剖析: one 是單數(shù)第三人稱,因此 have 應改為 has;同理,want 應改為 wants。本句是典型的主謂不一致。
改為: Once one has money, he can do what he wants (to do).
二. 修飾語錯位(Misplaced Modifiers)
英語與漢語不同,同一個修飾語置于句子不同的位置會導致句子的含義變化。考生需要注意修飾語的位置。
例1: I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.
剖析: better 位置不當,應置于句末。
改為: I believe I can do it well and will know the world outside the campus better.
三. 句子不完整(Sentence Fragments)
在口語中,可以通過手勢、語氣和上下文理解不完整的句子,但書面語中,句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整會導致意思表達不清。
例1: There are many ways to know the society. For example, by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.
剖析: 本句后半部分 "for example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on" 不是一個完整的句子。
改為: There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper.
四. 懸垂修飾語(Dangling Modifiers)
懸垂修飾語是指句首的短語與后面句子的邏輯關(guān)系不清楚。
例1: At the age of ten, my grandfather died.
剖析: "At the age of ten" 沒有說明“誰”十歲。
改為: When I was ten, my grandfather died.
例2: To do well in college, good grades are essential.
剖析: "To do well in college" 的邏輯主語不清楚。
改為: To do well in college, a student needs good grades.
五. 詞性誤用(Misuse of Parts of Speech)
詞性誤用常表現(xiàn)為:介詞當動詞用、形容詞當副詞用、名詞當動詞用等。
例1: None can negative the importance of money.
剖析: negative 是形容詞,誤作動詞。
改為: None can deny the importance of money.
六. 指代不清(Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns)
指代不清主要指代詞與被指代的人或物關(guān)系不清,或者先后所用的代詞不一致。
例1: And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
剖析: 句中人稱代詞 we 和反身代詞 yourself 指代不一致。
改為: We can also know society by serving it ourselves.
七. 不間斷句子(Run-on Sentences)
不間斷句子包含了兩個或多個獨立的句子,卻沒有適當?shù)赜脴它c符號或連詞分開。
例1: There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
剖析: 這個句子包含了兩層完整的意思。
改為: There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或 There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
八. 措詞毛病(Troubles in Diction)
措詞毛病是指在特定的句子中未能適當?shù)剡x用詞語。
例1: The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
剖析: obstacles 應為 substances;并且 "the increasing use" 應為 "the abusive use"。
改為: The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes pollution.
九. 累贅(Redundancy)
言以簡潔為貴,避免多余的詞語和句子。
例1: For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
剖析: 整個句子可以大大簡化。
改為: Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
十. 不連貫(Incoherence)
不連貫是指一個句子前言不對后語,或結(jié)構(gòu)不暢通。
例1: The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
剖析: the fresh water 與 it 不連貫。it 與 things 在數(shù)方面不一致。
改為: Fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
十一. 綜合性語言錯誤(Comprehensive Misusage)
綜合性語言錯誤包括時態(tài)、語態(tài)、標點符號、大小寫等方面的錯誤。
例1: Today, money to everybody is very importance, our’s eat, cloth, live, go etc.
剖析: 此句有多處錯誤,應根據(jù)具體表達進行修正。
希望這些總結(jié)能幫助你在雅思寫作中避免常見錯誤,取得更好的成績!
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