雅思寫作要進步，有些必定的路徑，比方多訓練，多了解考試的題型和論題，比方把握根本的學術文章的框架。那么在此之外，還有一些能夠如虎添翼的當地需求咱們去做，聽聽這位前考官是怎樣說的。6條良知主張，中英對照。

雅思寫作進步主張之保證句式多樣性

Once you know the different types of sentences, you should practice using them. The most difficult one is the compound-complex sentence, but even if you don’t know that, you can still get a good score with a mix of simple, compound, and complex sentences. The key is varying the length and type of sentence so it sounds natural. Look at this example:

如果你知道不同的語句類型，你就能夠試著多多練習。在眾多句型中，復合雜亂句式最難的，不過就算你不明白這個語法，嘗試用一系列的簡單句，雜亂句，和復合句相結合來寫這篇文章，你也能夠得到一個很好的分數。這個要害就在于語句類型和語句長度要多變，這樣寫作文也會比較天然。看一個下面的比如：

Firstly, children watch too much TV. It’s bad for their health. It can make them addicted. They will spend too much time indoors. This can make them fat.

The sentences are all short and could easily be mixed together into more interesting patterns

這個比如就是語句太短，你能夠把語句銜接在一起，而且得到一個愈加風趣的版別。

Firstly, children watch too much TV, which is bad for their health. This habit can cause them to become addicted, resulting in them spending too much time indoors and thus getting fat.

雅思寫作進步主張之緊記固定調配

Students preparing for the IELTS exam always want to study lots of vocabulary. This is understandable as vocabulary is important for understanding and making yourself understood. However, knowing a word’s meaning is very different from being able to use it. Learn a word in context and you will be able to apply it more easily. When you are learning vocabulary, pay attention to what words commonly go together.

學生們在準備雅考慮試的時分總會學習許多的詞匯，雅思詞匯關于咱們進步對英文的了解是十分有重要的。可是有些時分，知道一個詞語的意義和會運用它仍是有必定差異的。在文章中學習一個單詞會使得你在運用這個詞時愈加簡單。當你學習詞匯的時分，必定要注意的是什么姿態的調配會常常在一起。

咱們來舉幾個比如：

Verb + thought:

Spare a thought for 想到，替……考慮

Spare a thought for all those who are homeless on a cold night like this.

想到那些在寒冷的夜晚中無家可歸的人。

Hear ones thought 傾聽……的主意

Have you given the new proposal any thought yet? We’re keen to hear your thought

你有沒有考慮新提議了嗎?咱們巴望聽到你的主意嗎?

The thought just occurs to me that it’s mum’s birthday tomorrow and we haven’t got her a card.

我突然間想到了明天是我媽媽的生日，咱們還沒有給她卡片呢。

Gather one’s thought 理理思路

The President was taken aback by the question and took a minute to gather his thoughts.

總統被這個問題嚇了一跳，用一分鐘的時間來收拾思路。

Noun + preposition + thought:

great deal of thought 許多考慮

Shirley doesn’t devote a great deal of thought to her appearance.

雪莉對她的表面沒有太多主意

school of thought思維派系

One school of thought contends that modern man originated in Central Africa.

一種學派以為現代人類起源于非洲中部。

train of thought 思路，思緒

Sorry, where was I? I’ve lost my train of thought.

對不住，我提到哪里了?我剛剛沒了思路。

雅思寫作進步主張之防止運用really, so, a lot, very等口語化詞

In IELTS writing, you need to write an essay, using “academic” language. So your goal should be to be reasonably formal/academic. To do so, you should not use imprecise language like really, so, a lot, very, etc

在雅思寫作中，你需求運用學術語言，你的目標是正式和學術，所以你不要運用較為口語化的really, so , a lot and very.

舉一些比如

Many IELTS candidates think that achieving Band 8.0 in IELTS is very hard.

==> Use a stronger word: Many IELTS candidates think that achieving Band 8.0 in IELTS is difficult

Very good ==> top-notch, splendid, terrific, excellent, magnificent, fabulous, outstanding, etc

Very bad ==> horrible, terrible, outrageous, distressing, awful, etc

Very delicious ==> appetizing, delectable, flavorful, scrumptious, enjoyable, palatable, etc

Robot-driven car is really controversial

==> Robot-driven car is controversial

A lot of IELTS learners share their great tips on IELTS writing, speaking on IELTS Material website.

==> Many/A great number of/ A multitude of IELTS learners……

雅思寫作進步主張之不要在雅思寫作中運用縮略形式

It’s better to write out the words like:

最好寫成一下的姿態

Don’t ==> do not;Can’t ==> cannot;Mustn’t ==> must not;Couldn’t ==> could not

Wouldn’t ==> would not;Isn’t ==> is not;Haven’t ==> have not;Hasn’t ==> has not

雅思寫作進步主張之防止運用There is/ There are

When you write, try to write your ideas in a clear & concise way. There is/there are is extra words that are not needed. So just leave them out to make your sentences stronger and straight to the point.

當你在寫作的時分，盡力將你的主意用一種簡練的辦法出現出來。有些詞語是不需求的，這樣能夠使你的語句愈加直戳要點。舉例：

There are many issues that students have to face at university

==> Students face a multitude of issues at university

雅思寫作進步主張之把握語句根本類型

It’s really important that you know the difference between a simple sentence and a complex sentence. You don’t need to know the terminology, but it is important that you can form full sentences. Knowing the sentence types means being able to avoid these cardinal sins of writing:

了解簡單句和雜亂句式的差異很重要，你不需求知道術語，可是你需求有能力自己完結一個語句的寫作。了解語句類型能夠協助你防止許多根本的寫作過錯，比方：句不成句，語句成分殘損，粘連句，逗號誤接句

雅思寫作常見過錯1. SENTENCE FRAGMENTS:句不成句

This is the most common grammar error IELTS students make. A sentence fragment cannot be a sentence by itself. It does not even have one independent clause.

Remember: a simple sentence is an independent clause, which requires 3 things:

1. A subject

2. A verb

3. A complete thought

這是雅考慮生經常犯的過錯。殘損語句成分的語句片斷是不能夠獨自成句的，由于他并不具有成為一個完好的獨立分句的要素。記住，一個簡單句就是一個合格的獨立分句，它由3部分組成

主語，謂語，和一個完好的思路

Sometimes it seems to be a sentence, but if we examine it closely it lacks the necessary parts and thus cannot stand alone.

有時看起來像一個語句，可是當咱們細心研討時會發現它缺少了許多很要害的成分，因此它并不能成為一個獨立的語句。

Examples:

? The doctor worked round the clock. Operating on the boy.

? As India has entered the WTO. The local entrepreneurs are faced with both challenges and opportunities.

咱們怎樣改正這些語句呢?

Corrections:

? The doctor worked around the clock, operating on the boy.

? As India has entered the WTO, the local entrepreneurs are faced with both challenges and opportunities.

雅思寫作常見過錯2. RUN-ON SENTENCES:粘連句

A run-on sentence consists of two or more main clauses that are joined together without proper punctuation (comma, semi-colon, period, etc). We often speak in run-on sentences but our pauses indicate meaning; however, when we write we need to use punctuation to break up our sentences and impart proper meaning.

Comma splices occur when two independent clauses are joined by a comma. Remember: a comma is not strong enough to join these clauses itself! You need a conjunctive coordinator to complement it, or else use a semi-colon and a conjunctive adverb.

Most importantly, to do well in the IELTS writing you don’t need to be a punctuation expert. Just knowing commas and periods is usually sufficient for a good grade.

粘連句包含著兩個或更多的主句，他們連在一起，沒有標點分隔(逗號、分號、句號等)。咱們在說話的時分經常運用這樣的粘連句，可是咱們能夠用中止來表述清楚意義。在寫文章的時分，咱們需求用標點符號來分隔咱們的語句，讓它有更明確的表達意義。

雅思寫作常見過錯3 逗號誤接句

就是兩個獨立主句之間逗號銜接，這是許多考生會犯的過錯。記住，逗號不能鏈接兩個獨立的語句，你需求增加銜接詞來使它變完好，或許運用分號或許銜接副詞。

更重要的一點，想在雅思寫作中拿高分，你不需求對一切標點符號的運用都一目了然，了解逗號和句號的運用辦法就足夠了。

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