關于雅思寫作,網上流傳著各色濫竽充數的范文,小編私以為,這些粗糙的范文的存在,是中國烤鴨雅思寫作平均分低下的眾多原因之一。是故小編浪跡網絡搜集了前考官simon的雅思a類小作文共計41篇,全部采用他慣常的4段式套路,字數一般不過200詞,絕對是雅思寫作范文里的一股清流,非常養眼。請看本文針對常規題型的雅思小作文線圖范文,話題是三國在1940-2040年間老齡人口所占人口比例的變化以及比較,全文共178詞,9分級。
The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
該線圖展示日本瑞典和美國三國在1940-2040年間65歲以上人口所占比例的變化情況。請作答。
雅思圖表小作文線圖9分范文:
The line graph compares the percentage of people aged 65 or more in three countries over a period of 100 years.
It is clear that the proportion of elderly people increases in each country between 1940 and 2040. Japan is expected to see the most dramatic changes in its elderly population.
In 1940, around 9% of Americans were aged 65 or over, compared to about 7% of Swedish people and 5% of Japanese people. The proportions of elderly people in the USA and Sweden rose gradually over the next 50 years, reaching just under 15% in 1990. By contrast, the figures for Japan remained below 5% until the early 2000s.
Looking into the future, a sudden increase in the percentage of elderly people is predicted for Japan, with a jump of over 15% in just 10 years from 2030 to 2040. By 2040, it is thought that around 27% of the Japanese population will be 65 years old or more, while the figures for Sweden and the USA will be slightly lower, at about 25% and 23% respectively.(178 words, band 9)
附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路
段一:話題重述
段二:概括話題數據的主要特征或規律
段三:詳述特征規律一
段四:詳述特征規律二
注意:simon考官主張雅思小作文無須總結!大家可留心這一點。當然小作文是否需要寫總結段,無定論。
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