小編為大家帶來一篇雅思前考官simon的一篇范文，話題是關于大學教育的：Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.請看小編對其進行的逐段解讀，今天，無關結構，無關框架，我們只關心好詞與佳句。

1.People have different views about how much choice students should have with regard to what they can study at university. While some argue that it would be better for students to be forced into certain key subject areas, I believe that everyone should be able to study the course of their choice.

雅思寫作考官范文解讀：導入段首句(People have different views about how much choice students should have with regard to what they can study at university)寫得非常的精當，小白如畫地提取出了話題的主要內容，這種對原題的轉述能力，才是真真正正的同此替換，而不是很多雅思考生容易將其狹隘理解的那種高級單詞替換簡單單詞的過程。此外，將話題中的“only be allowed to”轉述為“be forced into”，也體現出了英語小詞的使用能力。而“of their choice”的使用則是超乎大多數人的寫作習慣(一般是一個定于從句that they want )，用簡單的結構替換從句，很顯然是棋高一著。

2.There are various reasons why people believe that universities should only offer subjects that will be useful in the future. They may assert that university courses like medicine, engineering and information technology are more likely to be beneficial than certain art degrees. From a personal perspective, it can be argued that these courses provide more job opportunities, career progression, better salaries, and therefore an improved quality of life for students who take them. On the societal level, by forcing people to choose particular university subjects, governments can ensure that any knowledge and skill gaps in the economy are covered. Finally, a focus on technology in higher education could lead to new inventions, economic growth, and greater future prosperity.

雅思寫作考官范文解讀：雅思大作文body部分的首段。第1，2句可以看成是觀點句(第一句算是概括，而第二句則是拋出具體的觀點)，同樣用詞極為簡潔，這樣做是為了讓閱讀者以最快的速度了解其觀點。assert一詞是與上一段的argue近義，常見的替換。不過這兒最需要給烤鴨說道說道的是情態動詞may，有必要回顧一下導入段的幾個情態動詞的使用：should have, would be, should be,。情態動詞的合理使用可以說是高分雅思作文的必備品。這些情態動詞有什么作用呢?，除開情態動詞，往往會使表達顯得禮貌之外，往往會會讓語句的表意更加準確而中肯。很多烤鴨大概不陌生這樣一種表達：no one can deny that或者there is no doubt that, 不知道你們看到這種句子是的感覺是怎樣的，反正我看到這種句子頓時升起一種反感，作者那傲慢且無知的形象更是躍然紙上。我要是就是要deny呢，我要是就是有doubt呢!所以，一個may(其實本段下面還有一個can起著同樣的作用)就將整個語氣緩和，觀點也變得更加站得住腳，不會有一種走極端的感覺。more job opportunities, career progression, better salaries, and therefore an improved quality of life for students who take them，這一連串的列舉非常的有氣勢，閱卷人估計也會看爽。好似一招長江三疊浪，更多的工作機會，職業成長，薪水，由此更好的生活品質，可以說是干凈利落的論證，讓人不得不信服。另外from a personal perspective和on the societal level都是高分表達，但其實又都很簡單。

3.In spite of these arguments, I believe that university students should be free to choose their preferred areas of study. In my opinion, society will benefit more if our students are passionate about what they are learning. Besides, nobody can really predict which areas of knowledge will be most useful to society in the future, and it may be that employers begin to value creative thinking skills above practical or technical skills. If this were the case, perhaps we would need more students of art, history and philosophy than of science or technology.

雅思寫作考官范文解讀：好詞preferred。簡潔有力表達 society benefit more，value...above...。非常地道的表達if this were the case(意思是real)當然最讓人稱道的是開頭的in spite of，可以說是非常的個性，但是卻無縫地與上一段對接上，并且還與上一段的首句有一種呼應感。

4.In conclusion, although it might seem sensible for universities to focus only on the most useful subjects, I personally prefer the current system in which people have the right to study whatever they like.

解讀：同樣的情態動詞的運用，妙不可言!!!可以說結論句中might與后面personally的搭配非常完美。

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