為大家?guī)?018年3月3日場雅思寫作真題回憶。題目為犯罪類話題，在大多數(shù)國家，監(jiān)獄是犯罪問題最常見的解決辦法。然而，更有效的解決辦法是為人們提供更好的教育，使他們不至于成為罪犯。

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In most countries, prison is the most common solution for the problem of crime. However, the more effective solution is to provide people with better education so that they do not become criminals.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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All people hope to live in a secure society, but crimes seem to exist throughout the world. Some people think that to address this problem, what we need is better education for people instead of punishment to criminals. In my point of view, both are essential in the battle against crimes.

所有的人都希望生活在一個安全的社會中，但是犯罪似乎在全世界都存在。有些人認為，為了解決這個問題，我們需要的是更好的教育，而不是懲罰罪犯。在我看來，這兩者都是打擊犯罪的關鍵。

There is no denying that sending lawbreakers to prison can contribute to maintaining public security and stability, especially for those who are convicted of grave crimes. After they are deprived of freedom, the criminals would reflect on their behavior and learn a lesson from it, which can effectively prevent them from committing crimes again. The punishment can also have deterrent effects on those potential criminals, who would consider the consequences of violating the law and give up their evil intentions.

不可否認的是，將違法者送進監(jiān)獄有助于維護公共安全和穩(wěn)定，尤其是那些被判犯有嚴重罪行的人。在他們被剝奪了自由之后，罪犯會反思他們的行為并從中吸取教訓，從而有效地防止他們再次犯罪。這種懲罰也會對那些潛在的犯罪分子產(chǎn)生威懾作用，他們會考慮違反法律的后果，并放棄他們的邪惡意圖。

However, imprisonment may not achieve the desired result and no matter how serious the penalty is, it seems unlikely to eliminate crimes completely. A large number of people perpetrate crimes because they have little knowledge about the law or basic skills for earning a living. Therefore, the first step is for the general public to receive more education and enhance their awareness about the law. Also, in some cases, if disadvantaged groups could learn some practical skills in school, they would be more likely to support themselves independently and become law-abiding citizens rather than choose to rob or steal.

然而，監(jiān)禁可能無法達到預期的結果，無論刑罰多么嚴重，似乎都不可能完全消除犯罪。很多人犯了罪，因為他們對法律或基本的謀生技能知之甚少。因此，第一步是讓普通大眾接受更多的教育，提高他們對法律的認識。而且，在某些情況下，如果弱勢群體能夠在學校學到一些實用技能，他們就更有可能獨立地支持自己，成為守法公民，而不是選擇搶劫或偷竊。

To summarize, multiple methods are needed to reduce the crime rate. Only by the combination of punishing perpetrators and educating the general public can we build a safe and stable society.

總的來說，我們需要多種方法來降低犯罪率。只有懲罰犯罪者和教育大眾，我們才能建立一個安全、穩(wěn)定的社會。