為大家帶來2018年1月20場的雅思寫作小作文范文，本場小作文話題為：

The graph gives information about the number of yearly visits from France and North America for holiday and business. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

1月20場雅思寫作小作文范文：

The line graph illustrates how many visitors from North America and France travel to UK for doing business and for taking a holiday in one year.

It is noticeable that the number of visitors from North America and France who take a vacation in UK is equal at only approximately 1 million in January. Since then North America enjoys a jump until July while France increases slowly but in this month, as many as around 3 million travelers from North American come to UK, in contrast to only 1 million France visitors. By contrast, figures for both areas afterwards have dropped back to merely some 1 million again in December.

Similarly, both regions also follow a similar pattern in the number of annual visitors for business. From around 0.15 million and about 0.05 million respectively in January, figures for these two regions saw a slight fluctuation across the whole year, with the peak at roughly 0.35 million and just 0.2 million separately in October or so.

Overall, the number of visitors from North America is higher than that of France for business and holiday, although both share a similar trend during the one-year period.

1月20場雅思寫作小作文范文解析

本次小作文是一個動態的線圖。注意主要信息點總體趨勢，極值和數據的對比以及時態的表達方式。

高分表達(范文中已用紅色標注) how many visitors from North America and France travel to UK for doing business and for taking a holiday in one year 在一年中有多少來自北美和法國的游客去英國做生意或度假。(用賓語從句改寫題目，注意下句型的轉換)

It is noticeable that 值得注意的是

in contrast to 相比于

with the peak at roughly 0.35 million and just 0.2 million separately in October or so. 兩者在十月份最高點分別是。。。 (獨立主格)