為大家帶來2017年12月14場的雅思寫作真題滿分范文,本場考試題目為社會類話題,題目為:In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their children when women work full-time.What are the reasons?Is it a positive or negative development?在很多國家,越來越多的男性在家全職照顧孩子,而女性出去工作。是什么原因呢?這是一個積極還是消極的發展呢?
雅思寫作Task2范文
Nowadays, more and more husbands agree completely to look after children and doing housework in social lives. There are various reasons for this view, so I think that it is a positive trend to need much understanding.
There are several causes of why a lot of fathers could not leave their house to gain occupation. Firstly, with modern life, the larger of women might be extremely desired to pursue their career and very busy, therefore, helping of their husband is quite important. Secondly, the role of each person depends on their ability to divide available tasks for everyone while in the past, the breadwinners in families attach entirely with husband’s obligation. For example, my friend’s husband has landed housework and take care of children after a long time of unemployment, whereas, my friend might be completely busy in company to earn more money, so they decided that husband would be continued that role because it is difficult to land a job in that time. Finally, the househusband could be more common, rather than much more husbands would prefer spending time on their baby to pursue vocation.
In my opinion, this change’s role in families progress perfectly. With the rising cost of living, couple should be careful to make decision who go out to earn money, who stay at home in order to assume childcare responsibilities. In addition, it is better equal role in families if society could be significant transformable in traditional minds. Therefore, women could be entirely time to follow their career after having baby and men could also give up their job to have more free time with baby without criticism of anyone. For example, in the past, my grandfather did not allow my mother following her favorite job such as teacher to look after children, but nowadays, when grandfather has been observed a bunch of wives who have breadwinners role in families, his view is opened mind.
In conclusion, more wives could be much opportunities in securing job and the husbands who agree childcare obligation would create much more progress and equal humanity.(346 words)
雅思寫作高分語料
地道用詞:gain occupation
obligation
land a job
pursue vocation
the rising cost of living
高分語段:For example, my friend’s husband has landed housework and take care of children after a long time of unemployment, whereas, my friend might be completely busy in company to earn more money, so they decided that husband would be continued that role because it is difficult to land a job in that time.
Therefore, women could be entirely time to follow their career after having baby and men could also give up their job to have more free time with baby without criticism of anyone.
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