為大家?guī)?lái)2017年12月15場(chǎng)的雅思寫作真題大作文范文，本場(chǎng)考試題目為社會(huì)類話題，題目為：In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their children when women work full-time.What are the reasons?Is it a positive or negative development?在很多國(guó)家，越來(lái)越多的男性在家全職照顧孩子，而女性出去工作。是什么原因呢？這是一個(gè)積極還是消極的發(fā)展呢?

雅思寫作9分范文

It is true that men are increasingly likely to take on the role of househusband, while more women than ever are the breadwinners in their families. There could be several reasons for this, and I consider it to be a very positive trend.

In recent years, parents have had to adapt to various changes in our societies. Equal rights movements have made great progress, and it has become normal for women to gain qualifications and pursue a career. It has also become socially acceptable for men to stay at home and look after their children. At the same time, the rising cost of living has meant that both marriage partners usually need to work and save money before starting a family. Therefore, when couples have children, they may decide who works and who stays at home depending on the personal preference of each partner, or based on which partner earns the most money.

In my view, the changes described above should be seen as progress. We should be happy to live in a society in which men and women have equal opportunities, and in which women are not put under pressure to sacrifice their careers. Equally, it seems only fair that men should be free to leave their jobs in order to assume their childcare responsibilities if this is what they wish to do. Couples should be left to make their own decisions about which parental role each partner takes, according to their particular circumstances and needs.

In conclusion, the changing roles of men and women in the family are a result of wider changes in society, and I believe that these developments are desirable. (274 words, band 9)

高分寫作用詞：

take on the role of

breadwinner

put under pressure

childcare responsibility

parental role

高分語(yǔ)段：

It is true that men are increasingly likely to take on the role of househusband, while more women than ever are the breadwinners in their families. There could be several reasons for this, and I consider it to be a very positive trend.

Equal rights movements have made great progress, and it has become normal for women to gain qualifications and pursue a career.

We should be happy to live in a society in which men and women have equal opportunities, and in which women are not put under pressure to sacrifice their careers.

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