1. The environment has been damaged severely, we need to protect our environment.

2. The air in rural areas is much better than urban areas.

3. There are two people sit there and talk with each other happily.

4. It is benefit to people if they could persist on exercise.

5. Knowing that students may be tempted from TV programs, it is important that students should be supervised by parents at home.

6. Government needs to protect our environment.

7. Teacher salaries rose from 70% in 1981 to 80% in 2001.

8, The number of married Americans reduced from 100000 in 1922 to 50000 in 1930.

9. The price of iPhone reached a peak which is 3400 rmb in 1990.

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1. The environment has been damaged severely, we need to protect our environment.

缺少and/so連接詞

2. The air in rural areas is much better than urban areas.

比較對象錯誤

應該是....better than that in urban areas.

3. There are two people sit there and talk with each other happily.

動詞數量問題(更深層次是非謂語錯誤)

sit和talk都加ing

4. It is benefit to people if they could persist on exercise.

最簡單粗暴但是很多同學犯的錯誤

benefit改成beneficial
 

5. Knowing that students may be tempted from TV programs, it is important that students should be supervised by parents at home.

邏輯主語的問題，逗號的后面應該改成

......., parents need to supervise students at home.

6. Government needs to protect our environment.

government是可數名詞哦

7. Teacher salaries rose from 40% in 1981 to 50% in 1991.

40%和50%后面各加一個of the total school spending(來源自劍8T2T1)

8, The number of married Americans reduced from 100000 in 1922 to 50000 in 1930.

reduce表示的并不是具體數字的下降，改成簡單的decline/decrease/drop即可

9. The price of iPhone reached a peak which is 3400 rmb in 1990.

不要使用定從去描述句子，你可以用with連接

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關于雅思寫作的語法水平提升

腦袋里面暫時就想到了這九個小句子，如果你覺得可以輕松找到8個句子全部的語法錯誤所在，那么理論上來說，你應該是具備了6.5及6.5分以上分數的語法水平，請注意我的措詞，僅僅是語法水平，但這個語法水平是必不可少的。如果有4~5個句子你可以比較輕松的找到問題，那么6分的語法水平應該是差不多的，這些問題是找我批改的作文里面最容易出現的一些簡單問題(除了句子5稍微有一點點難)，避免這些可以幫助寫作6.5分以下的同學提高0.5分左右，當然，還有單詞的拼寫、可數or不可數(這個其實對我來說也是煩死人= =)以及主謂一致等小問題，都要盡可能的避免。原來有個學生聽了我的課，跑去跟助教說“Panda老師說了，語法錯誤是沒關系的，錯了也不減分!”我聽到助教的反饋之后表示很無奈，因為我的原話是“如果你在一篇大作文or一篇小作文里面犯的所有錯誤控制在3~4個，那么考官如果大發慈悲or眼神不太好，其實并不會減分”。我也發現有一些同學是只會聽到對他們有利的話，至于是不是有條件or前提，他們不管= =那么如果是要求7or7以上的寫作分數，請你盡量保證整篇文章不要出現語法錯誤吧親~