雅思寫作分享今天簡單分析下一篇小作文。小作文在雅思寫作的備考中是很重要的，尤其對于那些短期備考，目標寫作總分在6～6.5分左右的烤鴨。因為雖然它只占到寫作總分的三分之一，但是由于它句型詞匯較為固定，思路簡單，更加容易掌握。好了，廢話不多說，直接上題分析。

　　The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

　　Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

　　這一題來自劍7中的test2，是一道很經典的變化趨勢圖，考官的作文句型工整，思路清晰，很具有借鑒意義。

　　考官范文及分析

　　The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.

　　分析：通過同義替換的方式改寫作文原題，符合KISS的原則(keep it simple and stupid)沒有像很多考生那樣在一開始就喜歡用一些倒裝句之類的高難句型來改寫。要注意雅思作文中精確的重要性。

　　In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these food, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities(around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed(just over 50 gram).

　　分析：抓住四種肉類的起點數據，進行對比和排序，說出了最受歡迎的牛肉和相對最不受歡迎的魚肉。注意在描述過去的數據時要用一般過去時。

　　However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.

　　分析：將下降的三種肉類放在一起書寫，信息呈現合理有邏輯。分別描述了牛肉和羊肉的變化趨勢，然后再用數據進行補充。先概括，再具體。后面的魚肉也是用了相同的思路進行書寫。

　　The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.

　　分析：開始描述唯一呈上升趨勢的雞肉。在描述的過程中很好地做到了“抓點”。具體描述了中間和牛肉以及羔羊肉的交點，以及最后的終點數據。通過上面的分析告訴廣大考生寫數據類的作文不要盲目寫很多無關緊要的數據。

　　Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.

　　分析：最后一段進行總的概括。小作文的總結段還是很重要的，考生既可以將它寫作在首段之后，也可以寫在最后一段。注意要從總體出發(fā)，觀察四種肉類之間對比，最后得出結論：雞肉越來越受歡迎，消費量上升，但是其他三種肉類呈下降趨勢。