摘要：接下來為大家?guī)砑彝ド铑愒掝}雅思大作文（分析利弊型）的一篇范文：同輩壓力對于年輕人的影響。我們一起來看解析和范文！

Task： Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by others in the same age. This is called “peer pressures”. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

思路解析：

1. 首先，同齡人的壓力會消除個性。舉例，在這種壓力下，年輕人總是關(guān)注，模范和跟隨他人，包括了衣著，口味和行為。這種一致性讓孩子們慢慢失去自我認(rèn)知(self identity)。

2. 同齡人的壓力還會導(dǎo)致年輕人犯錯。舉例，如果有同伴有著糟糕的生活習(xí)慣，如吸煙，喝酒和吸毒的話，那么這個年輕人就會忍不住去嘗試，并最終上癮。此外，為了服從某個團(tuán)體的所謂規(guī)矩，天真的年輕人會被迫使加入一些團(tuán)伙犯罪活動之中，如偷竊，搶劫等。

3. 當(dāng)然，某些適當(dāng)?shù)耐厜毫σ矔o年輕人的進(jìn)步帶來動力。舉例，在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)中，來自其他同學(xué)的良好的學(xué)習(xí)表現(xiàn)是一個天然的壓力，會刺激一個年輕人更努力的聽課，思考和完成作業(yè)。此外，如果朋友們有著去圖書館的習(xí)慣，那么這個年輕人也會被鼓勵去學(xué)習(xí)和閱讀。

參考范文：

Peer pressure refers to the influence exerted by a peer group in encouraging a person to change his or her attitudes, values, or behavior in order to conform to group norms. In my view, peers bring more negative influences on a youngster than the positive ones, and my reasons would be explored as below.

Individuality is removed. Actually, for the purpose of receiving the social acceptance, young people might consciously compel them to approve of and comply with ideas, views and behaviors of other peers, instead of obeying their inner hearts. One typical example is lifestyle. As living in groups, unconditionally catering to even-aged students and students around is the main way of young people to avoid being labeled as eccentrics, such as by blindly following their tastes of food and clothing, hairs, music and amusements like sheep.

The high vulnerability to peer pressure is a reason of youth violence and crimes. In fact, if companies have poor values and illegal behaviors, the youth would be brainwashed by the evil. For example, gravitating to young friends abusing alcohol or drugs, a youngster is very likely to try these new things, thus trapped in the addictions of unhealthy and unlawful habits. Similarly, in order to succumb to rules of a gang, a  teenager would engage in social crimes, like thefts, school bullying, vandalism, arson and rape. Consequently, the ill influence from peers will ruin the life of youngsters.

Admittedly, to some extent, the influence of peers is valuable, because a moderate peer pressure can sharpen good qualities of the youth. For example, in school education, the pressure of classmates is a natural motivation for a young student to study hard. In addition, when a child knows his or her friends have a habit of reading books in library regularly, he or she will feel tempted to do so. Therefore, a positive impact of peers can help to keep a child on a right track.

In conclusion, risks from peer pressures are over the benefits. Although children can be driven by pressures of classmates to work hard in school education, the adverse effects of such pressure on depersonalizing teenagers and forming ill behaviors and illegal minds among them should never be underestimated.

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