摘要：6月16雅思寫作真題范文分享。教育類話題在最近一兩個月雅思考試中熱度不減，這次考到的題目屬于教育領域中比較新的一道題。要求就大學生數量激增與就業難之間的關系進行觀點討論并得出自己的看法。請看高分范文

2016年6月16日雅思寫作真題聚焦在了大學生就業上：大學生過多是導致大學生失業率高的一個原因么。可以說，不管是高等教育極度發達的美歐日韓，還是在拼命追趕的中印，畢業即失業的大學生就業問題都是一個非常有話題性的議題。究竟是教育的過錯么?

Task：

Some people believe that the country would benefit a lot from more young people entering into university; however, others think that the large number of people receiving college education only leads to graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

一些人認為，有很高比例的年輕人能上大學讓國家收益巨大，而另一些人認為，這樣只會導致畢業即失業。討論兩種觀點并給出你的觀點。

分析：

教育類話題在最近一兩個月熱度不減，這次考到的題目屬于教育領域中比較新的一道題，但是換湯不換藥，我們早就見過大學畢業生就業難問題的相關考題。今天的這道題則改變了之前的“求解決”的問法，改為議論文的提問形式。

范文參考：

What university has done to our society is of widespread concern, opinions will differ according to different people, while I tend to believe that positive effects have been imposed on our community.

From the moral perspective to the ability perspective, well-educated graduates have been contributing to the nourishment of one community. A person with morality and a sense of cooperation, for example, is unlikely to do anything detrimental to others. Subjects such as history, psychology give facilities to the enhancement of students’ quality. Teachers also teach students how to cooperate with peers, which lays a foundation for their future lives and thus build a more effective running system in society: cooperation makes things done more efficiently.

Academic caliber derived from school is also beneficial to the development of one country. Individuals are encouraged to acquire a wide range of know ledge an allowed to specialize in one certain subject at universities, this ensures the constant influxes of talents of different domains such as biochemistry, engineering and so forth into corresponding industries. Therefore, productivity and economy is dramatically improved.

However, there is, of course, on major issue that becomes a headache for many young graduates, unemployment. Every year, with numerous uni-graduates pouring into talents market, it is soon to be seen that having a decent job turn out to be a rare occurrence among these youngsters. This problem then is progressed into other ones including robbery, fraud and terrorism.

But connections between university education and unemployment have not been testified still. Reasons may lie in graduates themselves, as there are still many cities and industries desperate in need of labour force. It is a common situation that under-developed areas are the last choices for many job seekers. Besides, for those vacancies which require high capability of some fields, there is a usual shortage of people who are truly competent.

Therefore, higher education is overall conducive to our society by providing sorts of applicant talents and the low rate of employment should be taken into consideration by the government and educational authorities who are responsible to solve the problems identified above.(348)

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