Task:

New parents should attend parenting courses to learn how to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

新晉父母應該參加育兒課程，學習怎樣撫養孩子。你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

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When it comes to the issue about the necessity of taking some parenting courses for new couples, some people argue that those courses should be recommended to new parents, but I may not agree with this opinion.

Admittedly, new parents lack relevant experience, which accounts for why they need such courses. It is common that most people will be rather nervous for giving birth to and taking care of babies for the first time. However, there are many details that are necessary for raising children properly, such as how to communicate with children and how to cultivate children’s interests. Those courses could correspondingly assist new parents to adopt their tasks quickly. Nevertheless, the function of parenting lessons should not be exaggerated.

Initially, there are other sources from which new couples could even gain better experience. For example, they could ask their parents, namely children’s grandparents, for advice since grandparents have spent decades of years on raising their children. Also, it may be more convenient for new couples to consult their parents and even ask them to give a hand for looking after children when necessary. Thus, there is no need to demand those young couples to participant in a course because specialists actually exist in such a close distance.

Furthermore, those standard courses cannot satisfy unique needs of different children. More often than not, the content prepared by teachers may not vary a lot when different parents come to such courses. In other words, parents may not gain personalized assistance from teachers, but only some regular tips. In the current era, such courses may not be satisfactory since different children may have different characteristics, which cannot be covered by just a few courses.

In sum, considering that there may be better substitutions of parenting courses and those courses may not function so well, there is no need to ask new parents to participate in those courses.

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