雅思作文開頭很重要，但失敗的開頭會直接影響雅思作文的得分。今天小編即將要分享給大家的是“修復雅思作文失敗開頭的方法（一）”，希望小編整理出來的這篇文章能夠對大家有所幫助!有興趣的小伙伴趕快和小編一起來看一下吧!

　　典型失敗案例一：

　　Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about thistopic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

　　修改方案：開門見山 直奔主題

　　n my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students toget married。

　　Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the bookor the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真題)

　　Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I havea friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet toread news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and moreimportant in our daily life.

　　Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

　　Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s reallyvery very important!

　　“見官死”開頭之二：中式英文人見人暈

　　典型失敗案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

　　In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart floweropened angrily……

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　　Topic 2- The population problem

　　The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the citycenters of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

　　Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

　　I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. Forexample, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always dobad things, he will get “baoying”.

　　“見官死”開頭之三：觀點模糊態度曖昧

　　典型失敗案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

　　“見官死”開頭之四：偏離主題無軌電車

　　典型失敗案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire thequalifications and quality essential to success through university education. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)

　　I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To havethese important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, ourfriends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

　　“見官死”開頭之五：語法錯誤慘不忍睹

　　典型失敗案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents acceptresponsibility and also be punished? (雅思真題)

　　About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punishparents too besides children is also should.

　　今天小編的分享就到這里了，以上就是小編今日想要分享給大家的“修復雅思作文失敗開頭的方法（一）”，希望能夠對大家的學習能有所幫助!更多精彩詳細資訊請隨時關注我們!

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