2019年7月27日雅思寫作點評!近期雅思考試已經結束了，大家考試考的怎么樣呢?小編今天分享的是2019年7月27日雅思寫作點評，感興趣的同學快和小編一起來看看吧!

　　A類小作文

　　[作文類型] 柱狀圖

　　[作文題目] The graph below shows the support rate of four solutions to global warming in four European countries.

　　圖表根據四個國家分四組，對每組組內對四種方法的支持程度分別列柱進行對比。

　　[綜合點評] 此類柱狀圖建議從組內和組間的兩種對比方式入手，注意每種解決方案最受歡迎和最不受歡迎的數據進行重點強調。建議主體段一段根據不同方案進行組間對比，主體段二段分不同國家進行組內對比，總結段再對特殊數據進行重點強調。柱狀圖的寫作中需要注意突出數據間的排名關系和差距。

　　A類大作文

　　[作文題目] Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be consequences for these children when they grow up?

　　[題目分析] 混合類題型，需要分段針對兩個問題分別作答

　　[題材類別] 教育類

　　[思路分析] TR部分得分重點在于論述父母無限給孩子滿足要求的利弊和長遠的危害，注意題干首句中隱藏的or決定了文章需要根據“孩子要求”和“孩子想要做的事情”分別論述。主體段首段作答第一小問，第二段作答第二小問。

　　【參考范文】

　　Some children are having all their wishes granted by their parents, be it something they want or something they want to do. In my opinion, this tends to be detrimental to the children’s growth and could have disastrous effects to them in the long term.

　　First of all, it’s undeniable that parents are to provide and fulfill the necessary needs and wishes of children, whether it’s some snacks or a taking them to a park. However, taking a step further and becoming the Genie in Aladdin could significantly obstruct the development of children’s sense of finite and boundaries. The first attribute, from my perspective, is achieved through denying their unreasonable requests, for example, tons of snacks every day, which effectively demonstrated how both the parents’ resources and abilities are finite. Whilst understanding the second could not be accomplished unless the inappropriate activities, say, littering in the park, are stopped. The parents could set up the idea of boundaries in such way.

　　With the absence of such senses, the children could grow up to be greedy and lawless adults. Unable to understand the idea of finite, there will be a tendency for children to demand more from their parents, for toy cars to actual cars, which, in the end, will destroy the family economically. On the other hand, adults who spurn at idea of boundaries could do the same to laws, which will lead to catastrophic results, including serious crimes that destabilizes the society. Many who committed crimes wouldn’t acknowledge that what they’ve done are wrong, as the idea of boundaries hasn’t been installed by their parents in the first place.

　　In conclusion, for parents, the question of whether the wishes of children should be granted must be carefully deliberated to install the essential idea of finite and boundaries in the children’s development. For those who wouldn’t say no to their kids are likely to raise up a group of greedy and lawless adults that will be rejected by the society.

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