雅思大作文題目

　　Most people try to achieve a balance between their work and other aspects of their lives. Unfortunately, few people are able to do this.

　　What are the main problems that people are facing and are there possible solutions?

　　高分范文及解析

　　開頭最好是篇幅短和進展快

　　In most developed cities, such as Shanghai and New York, busy professionals[ 此處為名詞：職業人士”] find it difficult to juggle a career and private life [ juggle：同時應付，用法：juggle A and B]. In fact, the balance is not unachievable.

　　主體部分針對題目的兩個問題作答，

　　可以自由分配筆墨，但是不可遺漏問題。

　　In general, the more time a worker spends on his or her job, the more the job pays. [前面的the more引導狀語從句，后面的the more引導主句] It follows that [“結論是”] A person is likely to work long hours for better pay and accordingly have limited time or have no mood for the personal life or have no personal life at all. For example, the person may rarely have time to spend with family or friends or have the time for leisure or interests.

　　Some people may have pursuits[可數名詞：追求] higher than financial gains[金錢(方面的)收益] . They may have work ethics[職業精神] that are too strong and thus incur[及物名詞：造成] excessive expense of[對于xxx的花費] time on their work. This dramatically reduces their time spent on personal life. Doctors and police officers are most likely to be such people.

　　In terms of solving the problems, there are several ways. If people could be lessobsessed with [著迷于] money, they may work less and allocate more of their timeto[分配xxx給xxx] being with family and friends. At this point, they must be constantlyreminded of [被提醒xxx] that. Also, employers could intervene[不及物名詞：“(良性)介入/干預”] . They could ask their employees who are too fixated on[著迷于/ 糾結于]their work to rest properly. At some institutions or companies, time-off iscompulsory[強制的] in order for staff to l/ad a balanced life.

　　結尾也是最好是短篇幅和少廢話/別重復

　　Often, it is not the case that workers do not want work-life balance; instead, they may have no idea how to balance work and life. If this is the case, external[來在外部的] help or intervention[名詞：(良性)介入/干預] is needed.

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