題目

Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.Do you agree or disagree?

題型：同意與否

翻譯：每天使用電腦對孩子的消極影響要大于積極影響。你是否同意這一觀點(diǎn)？

寫作結(jié)構(gòu)

開頭段：個(gè)人立場 理由陳述

主體段1：（贊同/反對應(yīng)當(dāng)每天使用電腦）理由 1 論證

主體段2：（贊同/反對應(yīng)當(dāng)每天使用電腦）理由 2 論證

讓步段：不可否認(rèn)掌握電腦技能的積極影響 論證

結(jié)尾段：總結(jié)理由 重申觀點(diǎn)

范文分析

開頭段

首先明確表示同意此觀點(diǎn)，然后給出理由。

個(gè)人立場：I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day.

理由陳述：This is partly because sitting in front of a screen for too long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of a young child, regardless of what they are using the computer for.

主體段1

主要的一點(diǎn)是電腦吸引孩子們的地方，通常是一些非常暴力的游戲。而沉溺于暴力的電腦游戲，孩子會(huì)變得自我中心，對外界麻木無感。

主題句：However, the main concern is about the type of computer activities that attract children. These electronic games tend to be very intense and rather violent.

遞進(jìn)解釋：The player is usually the ‘hero’ of the game and too much exposure can encourage children to be self-centred and insensitive to others.

主體段2

孩子們雖然可以通過電腦獲得信息、聯(lián)系朋友，但無法代替人與人的交往。孩子成長過程中需要真實(shí)的經(jīng)歷，這是電腦無法給予的。

主題句：Even when children use a computer for other purposes, such as getting information or emailing friends, it is no substitute for human interaction.

遞進(jìn)解釋：Spending time with other children and sharing non-virtual experiences is an important part of a child's development that cannot be provided by a computer.

###讓步段

不能否認(rèn)掌握電腦技能對孩子的積極影響。信息技術(shù)時(shí)代掌握電腦技能很重要，要在小的時(shí)候?qū)W習(xí)這項(xiàng)技能，以便在未來的學(xué)習(xí)和工作中使用。

主題句：In spite of this, the obvious benefits of computer skills for young children cannot be denied.

遞進(jìn)解釋：Their adult world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the Internet is the key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today. Therefore it is important that children learn at an early age to use the equipment enthusiastically and with confidence as they will need these skills throughout their studies and working lives.

結(jié)尾段

總結(jié)理由 重申觀點(diǎn)

I think the main point is to make sure that young children do not overuse computers. Parents must ensure that their children learn to enjoy other kinds of activity and not simply sit at home, learning to live in a virtual world.

重點(diǎn)表達(dá)

tend to agree 比較同意......

be insensitive to 對......麻木不仁

It is no substitute for... 無法代替......

non-virtual experiences 非虛擬的（真實(shí)的）體驗(yàn)/經(jīng)歷