題目

Parents are the best teachers.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

題型：同意與否

翻譯：父母是最好的老師。你是否同意這樣的說法？

寫作結(jié)構(gòu)

開頭段：背景介紹 個人立場

主體段1：（贊同/反對父母是最好的老師）理由 1 論證

主體段2：（贊同/反對父母是最好的老師）理由 2 論證

主體段3：（贊同/反對父母是最好的老師）理由 3 論證

結(jié)尾段：總結(jié)理由 重申觀點(diǎn)

范文分析

開頭段

在我的生活中，父母給予我支持、適時的批評，也教我怎樣生活，他們是很重要的老師，但卻不是最好的老師。

背景句：Throughout my life, I have been lucky enough to have a very good relationship with my parents. They have supported me, given me necessary criticism, and taught me a great deal about how to live my life.

個人立場：Parents can be very important teachers in our lives; however, they are not always the best teachers.

主體段1

父母和我們在感情上太親近了，以至于總是以安全的名義限制孩子的自由。

主題句：Parents may be too close to their children emotionally.

遞進(jìn)解釋：Sometimes they can only see their children though the eyes of a protector. For example, they may limit a child’s freedom in the name of safety. A teacher might see a trip to a big city as a valuable new experience. However, it might seem too dangerous to a parent.

主體段2

父母總是想把自己的喜好強(qiáng)加在孩子身上，不尊重孩子真正喜歡的東西。

主題句：Another problem is that parents may expect their children’s interests to be similar to their own.

遞進(jìn)解釋：They can’t seem to separate from their children in their mind. If they love science, they may try to force their child to love science too. But what if their child’s true love is art, or writing, or car repair?

主體段3

父母總是想把他們的價值觀強(qiáng)加給孩子，父母并不總是對的。

主題句：Parents are usually eager to pass on their value to their children.

遞進(jìn)解釋：But should children always believe what their parents do? Maybe different generations need different ways of thinking. When children are young, they believe that their parents are always right. But when they get older, they realize there are other views. Sometimes parents, especially older ones, can’t keep up with rapid social or technology changes. A student who has friends of all different races and backgrounds at school may find that her parents don’t really understand or value the digital revolution. Sometimes kids have to find their own ways to what they believe in.

結(jié)尾段

總結(jié)理由 重申觀點(diǎn)

The most important thing to realize is that we all have many teachers in our lives. Our parents teach us, our teachers teach us, and our peers teach us. Books and newspapers and television also teach us. All of them are valuable.

重點(diǎn)表達(dá)

in the name of... 以......的名義

force sb to do sth 強(qiáng)迫某人做某事

eager to do sth 渴望做某事

separate from 區(qū)別

keep up with 緊跟，不落后