2019年7月6日雅思大作文題目：網(wǎng)上商務(wù)會議及培訓的利弊

　　“Research has shown that nowadays business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this matter? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.”

　　解析&審題

　　本題是雅思考試近期難得一見的新題。

　　本題問：商務(wù)會議和商務(wù)培訓現(xiàn)在都喜歡在網(wǎng)上進行，這個肯定是好處和壞處都有，那么到底是好處多還是壞處多?

　　就這個問題，唐老師認為首先要抓住“商務(wù)”這個關(guān)鍵詞，我們不能去談其他類型的會議。那么什么是商務(wù)中最重要的東西?唐老師覺得是效率，利潤這些東西。從這個角度看，我們可以思考網(wǎng)上開會和培訓是不是有助于提高企業(yè)的效率和利潤。答案是顯而易見的。這樣，我們就可以用以下結(jié)構(gòu)來寫這篇作文：

　　第一段：引出話題

　　第二段：網(wǎng)上開會和培訓可能有的問題

　　第三段：網(wǎng)上開會和培訓可以提高企業(yè)效率和利潤

　　第四段：結(jié)論：對企業(yè)而言，網(wǎng)上開會和培訓的好處大于壞處。

　　這樣的作文，既做到了雙邊討論，又有自己鮮明的觀點，尤其是切中了題目的關(guān)鍵詞來進行回答。你注意到本題的關(guān)鍵詞“商務(wù)”并圍繞它來組織觀點了嗎?

　　以下請看唐老師的高分范文。

　　老師筆記

　　01

　　People used to spend a lot of time and money traveling from one place to another for business meetings or training. With the advent of the Internet, however, online interaction is becoming a trend. In the business world, I believe this trend brings about more advantages than disadvantages.

　　人們過去常?；ù罅康臅r間和金錢從一個地方到另一個地方進行商務(wù)會議或培訓。然而，隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的到來，在線交互正在成為一種趨勢。在商界，我相信這種趨勢帶來的好處多于劣勢。

　　解析

　　(1)本段引出要討論的話題，并提出自己的觀點。

　　(2)Used to... 過去做......

　　(3)With the advent of... 隨著......的到來

　　(4)Bring about 產(chǎn)生

　　02

　　Needless to say, going online is far from perfect for all business meetings and training. Obviously, one big disadvantage of online meetings is that participants may have a difficult time gauging the reaction of other participants, since they cannot read each others’ body language as well as they can in face-to-face communication. Besides, if the presenters are not technically savvy or have a fear of communication technology, the meeting could prove to be a disaster. Further, an online meeting or training can be interrupted by the Internet disconnection, which is possible for one reason or another, and be made less serious than expected.

　　不用說，在線并不是所有商務(wù)會議和培訓的完美選擇。顯然，在線會議的一個大缺點是與會者很難判斷出其他與會者的反應(yīng)，因為他們不能像在面對面交流中那樣好地閱讀對方的肢體語言。此外，如果發(fā)言人在技術(shù)上不精通或害怕交流技術(shù)，這次會議可能就是一場災難。此外，網(wǎng)上會議或培訓可以被網(wǎng)絡(luò)斷開而中斷(這個因種種原因完全是可能的)，從而變得沒有期望的那樣嚴肅。

　　解析

　　(1)本段討論網(wǎng)上會議和培訓的問題，本文提出了三個可能出現(xiàn)的問題：無法讀懂肢體語言;技術(shù)問題;網(wǎng)絡(luò)連接問題。

　　(2)Needless to say 不用說

　　(3)Far from 遠不是

　　(4)Gauge 判斷

　　(5)Savvy 精通的

　　(6)For one reason or another 因為某種原因

　　03

　　However, having business meetings and training online helps to boost efficiency and reduce costs. To begin with, to conduct an online business conference, the only thing required is the Internet connection without geographical limitations, and it is therefore a great method of time management. In addition, holding business meetings online offers the advantage of cost savings. Participants do not have to be flown in from distant points and put up in hotels since they can take part from any corner of the world. It is little wonder, then, that online meetings and training have become increasingly popular with business leaders in recent years.

　　然而，在線商務(wù)會議和培訓有助于提高效率和降低成本。首先，要舉辦一個在線商務(wù)會議，唯一需要的就是互聯(lián)網(wǎng)而沒有地域限制，因此它是一種很好的時間管理方法。此外，在網(wǎng)上舉行商務(wù)會議還有節(jié)約成本的優(yōu)勢。參與者不需要從很遠地方飛來，住進賓館，因為他們可以從世界的任何一個角落參加會議。因此，網(wǎng)絡(luò)會議和培訓近年來越來越受商界領(lǐng)袖的歡迎，這也就不足為奇了。

　　解析

　　(1)本段論證網(wǎng)絡(luò)會議和培訓帶來的好處：提高效率，降低成本。

　　(2)Boost efficiency 提高效率

　　(3)Geographical 地理的;地域的

　　(4)Put sb. up 把......安置

　　(5)It is little wonder that... .......不奇怪

　　(6)Be popular with... 受......歡迎

　　04

　　In conclusion, business meetings and training going online may have both positive and negative effects, but in the business context, it is certainly more an advantage since it can give a competitive edge to businesses by helping bring down their costs and improve their efficiency.

　　總之，在線商務(wù)會議和培訓可能會產(chǎn)生積極和負面的影響，但在商業(yè)背景下，它無疑更是一個優(yōu)勢，因為它可以幫助降低成本和提高效率，從而給企業(yè)帶來競爭優(yōu)勢。

　　解析

　　(1)本段總結(jié)，并提出自己的觀點。

　　(2)Context 語境;環(huán)境

　　(3)Give...a competitive edge 給......競爭優(yōu)勢

　　(4)Bring down 降低

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　　7分范文

　　People used to spend a lot of time and money traveling from one place to another for business meetings or training. With the advent of the Internet, however, online interaction is becoming a trend. In the business world, I believe this trend brings about more advantages than disadvantages.

　　Needless to say, going online is far from perfect for all business meetings and training. Obviously, one big disadvantage of online meetings is that participants may have a difficult time gauging the reaction of other participants, since they cannot read each others’ body language as well as they can in face-to-face communication. Besides, if the presenters are not technically savvy or have a fear of communication technology, the meeting could prove to be a disaster. Further, an online meeting or training can be interrupted by the Internet disconnection, which is possible for one reason or another, and be made less serious than expected.

　　However, having business meetings and training online helps to boost efficiency and reduce costs. To begin with, to conduct an online business conference, the only thing required is the Internet connection without geographical limitations, and it is therefore a great method of time management. In addition, holding business meetings online offers the advantage of cost savings. Participants do not have to be flown in from distant points and put up in hotels since they can take part from any corner of the world. It is little wonder, then, that online meetings and training have become increasingly popular with business leaders in recent years.

　　In conclusion, business meetings and training going online may have both positive and negative effects, but in the business context, it is certainly more an advantage since it can give a competitive edge to businesses by helping bring down their costs and improve their efficiency.

　　(300 words)